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Thursday, 18 October 2018

Would you Rather

Would you Rather

Be able to fly or Be able to turn invisible 

I would rather be able to fly because I would have a spectacular view on the city or town. I would also like to fly because you would be able to get places a lot quicker than other people. But the reason why I wouldn't like to be able to fly is because you could lose oxygen to breath in and out. you could also fly into something like a bird or a plane 


6 comments:

  1. Hi Levi its Divontae here from South Hornby school i like this blog post but i dont under stand why you put I like to be able to fly and why i dont want to fly i dont see any thing about not wanting or be able to be invisible but any ways I like this blog post. can you send some feed back to me. also why dont you want to be invisible???

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    1. I didn't complete it so I will fix it up and I haven't put the reason why I don't want the abillity to be invisible

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  2. Hi Levi I like you Would you rather. I like how you said that you could fly into planes or a bird. maybe next time you can put each sentence on a different line. why bid you not put a Walt.

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  3. Hi Levi Cruz here I like your would you rather but can you add more reason why you did your would you rather.

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  4. Hi Levi
    I really like the reasons you put in for you would you rather . I remember when I wrote my would you rather story . Maybe next time you could write a bit more .

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